Şuheda YILMAZ
13.04.2018
      
                HOW TO RAISE A HAPPY CHILD

You should have full complement to raise a happy child. First, parents should show love your children. Love is main character in growing child. Children who grow without love can't be happy. Second, you should teach to do with less to child in this way you prevent child to be spoilt.Generally, a child who have everything is thought as happy, but it is not like that. Such a child becomes spoilt. Third, parents should be friend with their children, because if  children don't get the attention that they deserve they look for it outside. This removes them from their parents. Fourth, show respect to your child. You should make him feel your respect rather than humiliating him. Finally, there are a lot of things to raise a happy child. Whatever don't give up being patient, because growing up a happy child
want patient.

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  1. İlknur Akdemir13 Nisan 2018 05:34

    ı like your topic sentence :)

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  2. Özlem İnal13 Nisan 2018 05:37

    1. full complement ?( what do you mean?) Change the words.
    2. First, parents should show love your children.(your, their?)
    3. character ( change the word)
    4. a child who have everything (has or have?)
    5. whatever?
    6. growing up a happy child
    want patient(wants or requires?)
    7. In general, it has a good organization.

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