Şüheda YILMAZ
02.04.2018
       
           WOMEN'S SUPERIORITY OVER MEN
    There are a lot of matters which accept women's superiority over men. First of all, empathy. Women are better at feelings than men. Women can empathize easily so they can understand people and solve problems quickly. Secondly, cooking and cleaning. Women are more skillful than men in these matters. In cooking, there are taste of  women's hand.Also, men always say that Mother's meal is different. In cleaning, If a woman does cleaning, she does hook line and sinker. But a man does slapdash. On the other hand, Looking after child is another point which shows women's superiority over men. A man can not look after a baby or child like a woman. Women as a mother interest in a baby or child's everything like his cry, meal, game, education etc. So God says that 'Paradise is under the feet of mothers'. Finally, according to a research, based on miles driven, male drivers have a 77 percent higher risk of dying in a car accident than female drivers. And a 2010 New York Times article cites a study that women are  safer drivers than men.
 To sum up, Women are more superiority in most matters than men. Even in matters which is thought as men are good.

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  1. Hatice Kara2 Nisan 2018 14:01

    Be careful about spelling that comes after comma.

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    1. Unknown2 Nisan 2018 14:18

      Ow fatal mistake I know I will be careful🙏

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  2. Fatma Çelik2 Nisan 2018 14:19

    You shouldn’t start big latter in a paragraph after comma.

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  3. emo3 Nisan 2018 06:21

    I don't say it is wrong but you can use "women are better than men at feelings. )

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    1. Unknown3 Nisan 2018 13:10

      Yess I thought it but I wrote that thank you 😇

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  4. Unknown3 Nisan 2018 08:41

    Be careful about punctuation anyway i like it gj ma homie :)

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