Şuheda YILMAZ
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23.02.2018




 HOW TO BE FIT
Being fit includes being healthy,looking good and being in shape.It isn't easy as you think.You can be necessary to give up from what you like;for example as coke,chip or getting up from the game console etc.You shouldn't consume oily foods.Instead of this,consume fruit and vegetables can be useful more.You should care your diet.While you are trying to be fit,exercise is a important factor.Regular exercise and diet helps to be fit.However being fit isn't being size zero or being well-built.It is a way to be healthy, escape problems of daily life and be protected against some effects of aging.Sometimes If you have health problems before you start to diet,do exercise to be fit,you should see a doctor.Otherwise ıt can make worse to you rather than being fit.If you aren't familiar,patient can be necessary for you.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

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  1. emo23 Şubat 2018 04:37

    nice!

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  2. İlknur Akdemir23 Şubat 2018 04:49

    I liked it :)

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  3. Unknown23 Şubat 2018 09:21

    Bu yorum yazar tarafından silindi.

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    1. Unknown23 Şubat 2018 09:24

      ➡"If you aren't familiar ..." We use" with" after " familiar "
      ( Be familiar with)
      ➡ You said : "Regular exercise and diet helps to be fit" I think this is " help" because exercise and diet are plural .
      Please don't be sorry. You can write better. 🌸

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    2. Unknown24 Şubat 2018 02:35

      Bu yorum yazar tarafından silindi.

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    3. Unknown26 Şubat 2018 03:22

      Thank you so much 😇I see I will care it 🌼

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  4. Adsız23 Şubat 2018 12:20

    Very well...)

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  5. F.Ahmet1 Mart 2018 12:47

    Try to use space after punctuation marks :)

    Your paragraph include good things. Good work.. :)

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